Thursday 10 May 2012

Evaluation

3 comments:

  1. Weeeeee! Nice looking piece. If you're after extending it a bit I think a slide or two going into more depth about how and why you used iMovie (and maybe why you chose iMovie over FCP) might be an interesting area to explore.

    Make sure you go through your presentation and attribute any quotes you've used to their sources by using quotation marks and the name of who said/wrote it in brackets, like slide 6 which is very, very similar to a piece by James Montgomery on the MTV website. Slide 15 is very much like Wikipedia. Just for example. Careful, I'm sure its unintentional but if I hadn't picked up on it the exam board could have deemed this plagiarism. make sure all the work is in your own words or sources are cited clearly.

    Slide 9 - didn't life imitate art (or vice versa) and, almost like Rhianna, find yourselves on the receiving end of a farmer's wrath after you'd strayed off the public right of way and ended up in his field? Or am I making that up?

    Slide 31 - you could develop that in further detail to give some more in depth explanation of what and how you used iMovie. The functions you used, the techniques you developed, the problems you encountered etc.

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  2. Your presentation on Music in the Online Age was due today on your blog and isn't. Please rectify by start of next week. Thanking you.

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